求职信的语气 [ 2006-12-18 10:37 ]
求职信要发挥最大的效果,语气必须肯定、自信、有创意而不过分夸张,如能事先了解雇主的喜好,或其他人格特点,根据人以群分的原理,求职信如果能迎合雇主的特点,求职的人一定可以比其他人占上风,获得面谈的机会。
注意下面句子中语气的不同:
I think that I would make a good ***** for you. 我想我可能成为贵公司的优秀员工。
I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can
fulfill the particular requirements of your ***** position.
我相信我的经验和别人对我的推荐可以使您充分了解我符合贵公司*****一职的需要。
I recently completed a course in filing at the ***** School of Business. I am
competent not only in installing a filing system that will fulfill the needs of
your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently.
最近我在***********读完*******课程,我相信不仅可以设计一套符合您的要求档案分类系统,而且可以进行有效的操作。
I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I
completed at the ******** School of Business, I can install and efficiently
operate a filing system for your organization.
我相信经过我在*******学校的********课程学习之后,我能够替贵公司设置并且操作一套档案分类系统。
第一句显得语气太弱,写信的人有点羞怯的样子。第二句有特殊风格,第三句则太过自信,第四句,作者在表示谦虚。在实际运用中,如果你不太了解雇主的话,不卑不亢比较好。
(来源:阿里巴巴 英语点津 Annabel 编辑)
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