原文:辛楣道:“大家干一杯,预敬我们大哲学家未来的好太太。方先生,半杯也喝半杯。”——辛楣不知道大哲学家从来没娶过好太太,苏格拉底的太太就是泼妇,褚慎明的好朋友罗素也离了好几次婚。(钱钟书《围城》)
翻译关键词:干一杯,unware的用法,crawl与creep,好几次
译文:Hsin-mei said, "Everyone drink a toast in advance to the good wife of our great philosopher. Mr. Fang, you drink too, even if only half a glass." Hesin-mei was unaware that great philosophers have never had good wives. Socrates' wife was a shrew and poured dirty water on her husband's head. Aristotle's mistress rode on him like a horse, telling him to crawl on the floor naked, and even making him taste the whip. Marcus Aurelius' wife was an adulteress, and even Ch'u Shen-ming's pal Bertrand Russell had been divorced several times. (美 Jeanne Kelly, Nathan K.Mao: Fortress Besieged)
翻译笔记:
干一杯
我们常用的“干一杯”的表达有drink a toast和cheers。赵辛楣说这句“大家干一杯”,我们也可以说:So everyone, cheers! 那么,“为……干杯”我们通常说:To good health!(“为健康干杯!”)A toast to the friendship! (“为友谊干杯!”)
我们需要注意的一点是,toast单独用来指“烤面包片”时,是一个统称。我们不说a toast来表达“一片烤面包”,也不说toasts表示“多片烤面包”,而是说a slice of toast和slices of toast。
unaware的用法
与aware一样,unaware后面接of或以that引导的从句,如:
He is aware of our presence. / He is aware that we are here.
又如:He was unaware of her presence. / He was unaware that she was present.
crawl与creep
中间关于Socrates,Aristotle和Marcus Aurelius的事例是译者为了让读者更好理解而插入的添加成份,用来加强“大哲学家从来没娶过好太太”这句话的例证。我们要做的并非深究其真实性,然而,Aristotle的太太让其光着身子在地上爬这个crawl其实是含有贬义成分的。我们来比较一下crawl与creep就知道了。
crawl多指蛇,虫类等身体沿地面或其它表面的动作,很少用来形容人。如:
There is an insect crawling up your back. 有一条虫子正在你的背上往上爬。
creep多指四肢爬行的哺乳动物或人等偷偷摸摸、无声缓慢的前行动作。如:
They arrived late and crept into the classroom. 他们迟到了,便悄悄地溜进教室。
好几次
“好几次”这个词的感情色彩应该是“多”,试比较下面两句:
I bought several books this morning.
我今天早上买了好几本书(不止一两本)。
I bought some books this morning.
我今天早上买了几本书(不多)。
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(来源:沪江英语 编辑:崔旭燕)